Clubs/Organizations Writng ( Yearbook Class III - over 1,800)Back
Place Name: First Place Contestant Name: Rock Canyon HS / Yearbook Entry Title: Clubs/Organizations Writing_Rock Canyon HS Entry Credit: Kira Zizzo Judge Comment: This was a great article detailing what this group does, as well as a specific activity the group sponsored. Good work incorporating quotes to add to this story.
Place Name: Second Place Contestant Name: Castle View HS / Yearbook Entry Title: Dazzle Entry Credit: Maddie Robinson Judge Comment: This was an excellent article. There were some really good quotes by members of the cast and the writer did a good job explaining this performance and its controversy. I might like to see a bit more information about the drama club - how many members, etc. Overall, good work though.
Place Name: Third Place Contestant Name: Eaglecrest HS / Yearbook Entry Title: Wheels Turn, Heads Spin Entry Credit: Thy Phung Judge Comment: This was a good story. There is just a tiny bit of information at the end about the club - perhaps you could have put a "header" above those sentences to set them apart from the rest of the story. An example might be, "About the Club." Good work though!
